Question

Which statement is the best evaluation of this paragraph?

The paragraph is sound but needs more supporting
evidence to be complete
The paragraph does not have a topic sentence, so it is
only partially complete
The paragraph needs to be completely revised, since it
lacks focus and clarity
The paragraph is less effective after the first sentence
because of its disconnected ideas.

Answer 1

What paragraph, I want to help but what paragraph are we speaking of?

Answer 2

a. The paragraph is sound but needs more supporting evidence to be complete.

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