Question

Part B

Reread the paragraph above. Which is the best way to revise sentence 4 to make the paragraph more interesting for
readers?
People who watch the Perseids in August see the skies come to life.
Have you ever seen the skies come to life?
It can be truly amazing to watch the skies come to life!
People enjoy watching the skies come to life, so you should watch the Perseids in August.

Answer 1

I would revise the sentence to, "You should watch the Perseids in August as the skies come to life." or something along the lines of that.