What error has been made in the email? The purpose of the email is unclear. Subject: Pretty Paws Team Meeting Change Dear Pretty Paws Team, Thank you for your hard work during t…

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What error has been made in the email?

The purpose of the email is unclear.
Subject: Pretty Paws Team Meeting Change
Dear
Pretty Paws Team,
Thank you for your hard work during the holiday season.
The purpose of this email is to let you know that our
January meeting has been moved to Wednesday the 21st
at 7 a.m. in the main office. Please bring your team
handbooks. Please reply if you have any questions or
concerns. Sincerely,
Nina Keiffer
Owner, Pretty Paws Doggie Day Spa
Formal language is not used consistently.
The subject line should not be capitalized.
There are formatting issues in the greeting and
closing.