Question

Read the sentence and answer the following question: I like many things about scientific subjects, mainly the observations and data studies. Which revision would make this sentence more precise? I like many scientific things like observing and data studies. I like studying science because I enjoy making observations and analyzing data. Many things about scientific topics, like observations and data, are enjoyable to me. Making observations and analyzing data are likeable science things.

Answer 1

B. I like studying science because I enjoy making observations and analyzing data

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Answer 2

B). I like studying science because I enjoy making observations and analyzing data.

Step-by-step explanation:

As per the question, option B i.e. 'I like studying science because I enjoy making observations and analyzing data' demonstrate the revision which makes the given sentence more compact and precise as it involves the exact necessary details by eliminating all the redundant and unnecessary words of descriptions from the sentence. It clearly conveys the choice('I like studying science') and the purpose or reason('because I enjoy making observations and analyzing data') displayed in the original sentence in a compact yet coherent form by removing needless words or details. Therefore, option B is the correct answer.