Question

When the time came to go home, I could not open my locker. In my last period gym class, I hurt my ankle. Today was a day when everything seemed to go wrong. Tomorrow, I promise myself, I will wake up on time. First, I overslept. Then I realized I had forgotten my library book. My hobby is stamp collecting. Because of that, I almost missed my bus.

Type yes or no to answer the following questions:

Do the preceding sentences combine to form a good paragraph? a0
Is the first sentence a good topic sentence? a1
Do all of the sentences relate to a single idea? a2
Are the sentences presented in a logical time sequence? a3

Answer 1

yes

no

yes

no

Step-by-step explanation:

Answer 2

a0-yes

a1-no

a2-yes

a3-no

Explanation:

a0-the sentences are all good on their own but would work better if put together differently

a1- a good topic sentence draws the reader in

a3- the end of the paragraph would also work better if put together differently