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When Breanna and her sister began baking the cake, she realized they were out of flour.

Which correction would make this sentence more clear?

changing “her sister” to “the girl”

2 Answers

5 votes

Answer:

when Breanna and the girl started baking the cake, they realized they were out of flour.

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User Omu
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no I think you should keep it how it is
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User Kotlomoy
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