Answer:
1.) Add a comma in between weather and because, make the "b" lower case.
2.) Take away the period and make the "I" in if lower case.
3.) Put a comma after "day" and take away the period between "sale" and "and"
4.) Put a comma after street (make sure when adding commas to change the word after it to a lower case.)
5.) No need for changes.
6.) Put a comma between "cry' and "Maria".
7.) No need for changes.
8.) Make the period a comma between the "response" and "A"
9.) No need for changes.
10.) Change the period into a comma between "toys" and "turning"