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Which revision of the passage best connects ideas and adds variety? Running is great exercise, or it is an inexpensive activity. You can run on a treadmill. You can run outdoors. You should not, therefore, run on icy roads. Running is great exercise. Running is inexpensive, yet you can run on a treadmill. You can run outdoors, however you should not run on icy roads. Running is great exercise, and it is inexpensive. You can run on a treadmill, or you can run outdoors. You should not run on icy roads, however.

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A.) Running is great exercise, or it is an inexpensive activity. You can run on a treadmill. You can run outdoors. You should not, therefore, run on icy roads.

B.) Running is great exercise. Running is inexpensive, yet you can run on a treadmill. You can run outdoors, however you should not run on icy roads.

C.) Running is great exercise, and it is inexpensive. You can run on a treadmill, or you can run outdoors. You should not run on icy roads, however.

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User Joel Filho
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Answer:

the last sentence.

Step-by-step explanation:

the flow is better on the 3rd one, less jarring and stopping.

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