Question

1) You are writing a story about a beach trip your environmental science class took. You have written the following sentence for your story, but you'd like it to contain more vivid details: The class saw many different sea animals on the shoreline. Which revision of this sentence contains more vivid details? A) Jeff noticed lots of movement on the shoreline. B) The students were amazed at the variety of animals living on the coast. C) Many different sea-creatures were spotted by the class on the beach trip. D) "Look!" Jeff cried out, "the entire shore is covered with thousands of tiny fiddler crabs!"

Answer 1

I would say B. is the best answer. Happy to help!

Answer 2

D) "Look!" Jeff cried out, "the entire shore is covered with thousands of tiny fiddler crabs!"

Step-by-step explanation:

It is easier to imagine a beach full of specific sea animals than unknown ones