Question

I am enjoying these mysteries said keegan I think they are fun to read

There are 9 improvements to be made.

Answer 1

1, capitalize “i”
2, quotations before i
3, quotation after mysteries
4, comma after mysteries, before quotation
5, capitalize keegan
6, comma after keegan
7, quotation between comma after keegan and I
8, period after read
9, quotation after period