Question

Revise by removing vague or repetition pronouns.

sandra met lucy for lunch. she wanted to talk about her new job.

Answer 1

Something Like:

Sandra met Lucy for lunch, Sandra wanted to talk about her new job.

Step-by-step explanation:

I replace “she” with Sandra because “she” and “her” mean the same thing and it is repeated and becoming repetitious. If you don’t want the sentence to sound repetitious replacing “she” with the actual name which in this case “Sandra”changes up the sentence.