Question

What is a good thesis statement for the topic of “People are influenced by their environment and those around them”?

Answer 1

It depends on the type - research, explanatory, informative, or argumentative. But a proper thesis sentence for this topic looks like this, “People are influenced by the things and people around them negatively because of societal pressure.”

Answer 2

This is the best that I got.

The influence of certain environments and the influence of others can greatly impact a person.