Question

Help pls!

can someone make this sentence more like a 7th grader said it or something:

The West has large open areas untouched by people. The land includes large forests, deserts, and mountains. The variety causes wide differences in weather. Hiking and camping are popular. The environment is an important issue. Ranching, lumbering, and mining are important industries. Los Angeles, Seattle, and Denver are major cities

Answer 1

The west has huge vast areas untouched by civilians. This land includes massive forests deserts as well as tall mountains. The variety causes a lot of weather changes

Answer 2

This is my answer(remember it never hurts to sound good ;) )

The west has large untouched forests, deserts, and mountains. The variety causes differences in weather. Hiking and camping are popular. Ranching, lumbering, and mining are important industries, that hurt the environment. Los Angeles, Seattle, and Denver are major cities where all of these events take place.