Question

Revise the following essay so that it’s more appropriate for the task, purpose, and audience described in the prompt.

Make sure you put this in your own words thank you for your help.

Answer 1

I typically arrive at the school early, around 8:00. Sometimes I feel uncomfortable even though I usually meet with my friend Brandy while I’m waiting for class to start at 8:15. I have noticed there is a camera by the lunch table, but I’m not quite sure if it works.

That’s all I have time for that will give you a start I’m sorry