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PLZ HELP!1!1!1!1 How could this excerpt from an essay best to be revised to clarify the meaning and enhance style?

PLZ HELP!1!1!1!1 How could this excerpt from an essay best to be revised to clarify the meaning and enhance style?
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How could this excerpt from an essay best to be revised to clarify the meaning and enhance style?

PLZ HELP!1!1!1!1 How could this excerpt from an essay best to be revised to clarify-example-1
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Use evidence that supports the topic sentence more clearly.

Step-by-step explanation:

The evidence doesn't support the topic sentence very well.

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