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I need help with poem spacing! please add spacing, commas, periods, or remove them if needed.

underneath my skin, is a heart
undeniably broken.
unworthy of being able to be put back together.
unfortunately, he took a piece.
unable to keep the light out and the dark in.
unworthy, unfortunately, and unable, we’re all words that he would say.
no, i didn’t forget the word underneath.
now, understand that underneath my skin, is a heart with love that is fading away.

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User Jerrod
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Underneath my skin is a heart.
Undeniably broken.
Unworthy of being able to be put back together.
Unfortunately, he took a piece.
Unable to keep the light out and the dark in.
Unworthy
Unfortunately
And unable.
We’re all words that he would say.
No I didn’t forget the word underneath.
Now understand that underneath my skin is a heart with love that is fading away.

Super cool poem. :)
Tip: When your writing a poem read it and every time you pause make it into a new line. or instead of periods make it a new line.
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User NobbyNobbs
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