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What should I improve in this poem? Plz help

What should I improve in this poem? Plz help
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What should I improve in this poem? Plz help

What should I improve in this poem? Plz help-example-1
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The 5th one add Cause that what you are supposed to do as a kid

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The stanzas if you wnat could be shorter love it tho
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