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Read the Passage:

His kite went into electrical wires. A spark of electricity lit the kite. Pieces of burning kite drifted into nearby trees, starting a forest fire.

Which revision is needed for this passage?

A. Use the verbs "flew" and "ignited" instead of "went" and "lit."
B. Clarify the main idea in the third sentence.
C. Eliminate the third sentence.
D. Put the second sentence at the end.

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User Kun Ling
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Answer: A

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User Leszek Jasek
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Answer:

A because it clarifies how the kite moved to get to the eletrical wires and ignited is commonly used to refer the cause of a fire

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