Question

Can u guys help me fix my thesis?

This this my thesis : The value of life is determined by who the type of teenagers / adults you are.

And this what he wants me to fix : what type gives value to life? Your thesis has to take a position.

Answer 1

Instead of putting / I would personally put this: The value of life is determined by the person you grow to be and sustaining that value as you go through life.

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