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Read the sentence.

She likes to go to the beach on the weekends because the beach is where she likes to read.

Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?


She likes to go to the beach on the weekends and on the beach is where she likes to read.

On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach and read.

She likes to go to the beach on the weekends because that is the place where she likes to read.

On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach because the beach is where she likes to read.

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Answer: On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach because the beach is where she likes to read.

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User Petergus
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On the weekends, she likes to go to the beach and read.

The sentence is clear, simple, or not redundant.
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User Ahmed Abbas
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