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Which sentence was revised to make its language more precise? a. She had long, dark hair. b. Ana had long, dark hair. c. Her dark hair was very long. d. Ana’s black ponytail hun…

Which sentence was revised to make its language more precise? a. She had long, dark hair. b. Ana had long, dark hair. c. Her dark hair was very long. d. Ana’s black ponytail hun…
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Which sentence was revised to make its language more precise?

a.
She had long, dark hair.

b.
Ana had long, dark hair.

c.
Her dark hair was very long.

d.
Ana’s black ponytail hung to her waist.

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User Rnevius
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It is more detailed and precised
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User Luke Yeager
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D, it’s more succinct in describing Ana’s hair without just outright saying it
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User Bilal Akil
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