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Do I need to fix anything for my 3rd body paragraph?

Do I need to fix anything for my 3rd body paragraph?-example-1
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Poison should not be capitalized. Remove “of the play” in the sentence “Throughout the play, poison is present in several scenes…” to avoid redundancy. Remove “for instance” as it does not make sense in the context of the sentence and just let “The symbol of poison…” start the sentence.
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