Kathryn is writing a problem and solution essay about the lionfish. Her thesis statement reads: The Florida Wildlife Commission says the lionfish, which looks disgusting, is a species causing horrible

Kathryn is writing a problem and solution essay about the lionfish. Her thesis statement reads:

The Florida Wildlife Commission says the lionfish, which looks disgusting, is a species causing horrible problems for the fishing industry in Florida and I believe that we need to stop it before it eats all of the cute baby snapper and grouper.

What makes this thesis statement ineffective?

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