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Is this a strong thesis statment

Beowulf is a selfish person who only wants to bring glory,fame,and honor to himself and that is the flaw in Beowulf that affects the story

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I’d rewrite it as: Beowulfs flaw in the story is that they were a selfish person whom only wished to help with anything if it benefited themselves. Through this awful behavior it is clear that that character flaw negatively affects the plot
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