Question

Rewrite the following passage so that is has a more positive tone: "Nora glared out the window and sighed. She frowned up at the gray clouds in the sky.

This was not what she hoped for on her birthday."

Your response should be 3-5 sentences long and show that you've thought about the topic/question at hand

Answer 1

Nora gazed out the window and hummed. She smiled at the the fluffy clouds that rolled past outside in the sky. It was beautiful sight to start her birthday with.