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What is the best change we can make to this sentence? When I opened my present I let out a yell.

What is the best change we can make to this sentence? When I opened my present I let out a yell.
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What is the best change we can make to this sentence?

When I opened my present I let out a yell.

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When i opened this mysterious present, my stomach begun to flutter, I was excited but nervous of what could be inside. As soon I opened it I let out a a squeal that deafened my own ears.
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