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EXAM DUE TODAY

Pick the sentence that avoids redundancy and wordiness.

We hoped that the person who managed the restaurant would sponsor our baseball team.
We all really hoped that the restaurant person would sponsor our baseball sports team.
We hoped that the restaurant manager would sponsor our baseball team.
We were all really hoping that the person who managed the restaurant would sponsor our baseball team.

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The last one because it chooses a wide word choice.
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