What are the mistakes in the following paragraph?
In the second paragraph of his article Eli claimed that adults are more
responsible then teenagers. Though this is usually true he failed to
recognize the teens that hold down jobs, get good grades in school, and
look after younger siblings. Some admit that some teens are responsible
but most believe that the amount of teens like this is relatively small.
Teens deserve more credit.
there should be a comma between "paragraph" and "of"
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