Question

I know I already posted this, but I just want to make sure this letter is good.

Dear Carrie

I was really nervous to tell you this last week so I wrote you this letter, but you are a loving, caring, sweet person. But most of all it's your beauty that draws my attention to you. And whenever I see you my heart stops and it's like I'm looking at an angel. And if you would like to go out sometime I'd love to get to know you better. Btw this is Jacob.

Answer 1

You started a sentance with "and" twice. Delete the second one and it sounds better.

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