Question

I am writing a literally analysis but I am having a little bit of trouble, can someone give me some tips I can include in my essay?

Answer 1

avoid using colloquialisms such as "add insult to injury". Instead find a more formal way of describing what you are trying to say. And secondly try to avoid using the word "thing" as much as possible. It doesnt sound very formal.Try finding an alternative word or another way to form that sentence. I hope this helps!

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Answer 2

I mean it looks great

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I know that that isn't the best feedback for you question but great job!!