Question

Read this passage:

My novel is about the important things that happen to people.
The story focuses on a person who has a goal in life, but things
get in the way of that goal. By the end, the person has learned a
lot.
What is the best way to improve the clarity of this passage?
A. Choose a more appropriate topic.
B. Use simpler sentences.
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C. Use more concrete language.
D. Make the tone more professional.

Answer 1

I think you should go more in depth about "the important things that happen to people" and use more detailed language. it seems interesting but just use the correct language to engage the audience