Question

Read the following sentence:

The alumnus spoke to the students in an enthusiastic way
about his experiences since graduating high school.
Which revision best eliminates the wordiness in the sentence by replacing a
phrase?
OA. Enthused, the alumnus spoke to the students about his
experiences since graduating high school.
OB. The alumnus addressed the students in an enthusiastic manner
about his experiences since graduating high school.
OC. The alumnus talked to the students with interest about his
experiences since graduating high school.
OD. The alumnus spoke to the students enthusiastically about his
experiences since graduating high school.

Answer 1

The answer is D. The alumnus spoke to the students enthusiastically about his experiences since graduating high school.