Question

Read the following thesis statement and pay attention to the controlling idea. Is the controlling idea specific enough to make an effective thesis statement, or is it too general and unclear? My vacation to Paris was very nice.

Answer 1

Explanation: why was you vacation very nice ? give an example. was the hotel good. Did you like the people. what did you have to eat . what was very nice about it. dig into you memory and talk about actual facts that were very nice or lovely. was it romantic. was the dinner delicious. was the weather great or awful. describe how things were to the listener. they cannot read your mind.