Question

Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly? "Do I have to go to the family reunion this Saturday to visit with our relatives?" Larry inquired. "It is important," his mother replied, "and we will all have a great time." A. incorrectly B. correctly i need help

Answer 1

Actually, this dialogue is incorrect because when a dialogue is happening, each time a new person speaks, a new paragraph has to be made. So I would say this dialogue is incorrect.

Answer 2

Yes, this sentence is technically written correctly. It's a little awkward in terms of form but there's nothing specifically wrong with it, since question marks go inside quotations.