Question

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

When you were very small 8–10 pounds, you slept in this cradle.

A.
When you were very small (8–10 pounds), you slept in this cradle.

B.
When you were very small—(8–10 pounds), you slept in this cradle

C.
(When you were very small 8–10 pounds,) you slept in this cradle.

Answer 1

The correct answer is A. because, that is the answer that makes the most sense. It also is the only choice that is properly written with correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation.

Hope I helped!

- Debbie