Question

Rewrite the following sentence to use an original absolute phrase. All work must be your own. Use proper spelling and grammar.

The store was freezing

Answer 1

Answer: The store, its air conditioning system working overtime, was as cold as a meat locker.

Answer 2

if i am to use a proper spelling and grammar, that sentence could be changed into :
The store, with its half roof covered in snow, was freezing to the point where the customers were visibly shaking

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