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how does this sound? this is a paragraph written by a British spy in colonial times. I'm supposed to Write about the future of the U.S. See are they a threat to Brittain. Please just read it and see is it okay

how does this sound? this is a paragraph written by a British spy in colonial times-example-1
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User Headcrab
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I think that it needs some work and some tweaks but it looks good

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User ACarella
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