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With her heavy dictonary, Donna thumps the top other ancient computer monitor.  Whenever the color tint flickers from normal to sickly yellow.

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With her heavy dictionary, Donna thumps the top other ancient computer monitor. Whenever the color tint flickers from normal to sickly yellow.
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User Rafahoro
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The fragment is "Whenever the color tint flickers from normal to sickly yellow"

It should be changed into "Whenever the color tint flickers from normal to sickly yellow, [DETAILS]"
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