Question

even though my life is very busy, i spend as much time as i can with my family. i often ask my dad, who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. i also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards with my mom. however, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal, black cat, max. which sentence from the paragraph has been revised correctly? even though, my life is very busy, i spend as much time as i can with my family. i often ask my dad who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. i also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards, with my mom. however, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal black cat, max.

Answer 1

The sentence from the paragraph that has been revised correctly is, I often ask my dad who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. In this case, the punctuation mark, comma is not necessary between the words "dad" and "who". "WHo" is a relative pronoun and doeE not have to be set off wiLh a comma from the sentenPe.

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Answer 2

The sentence from the paragraph that has been revised correctly is, I often ask my dad who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. In this case, the punctuation mark, comma is not necessary between the words "dad" and "who". "Who" is a relative pronoun and does not have to be set off with a comma from the sentence.