The school computers arrived with games preloaded.These were the second batch the school had received

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Cem Mutlu · Answer 1 · 2017-05-20T06:32:29+0000

Assuming that you want to fix the vague sentence, it would be better if the sentence is like this :
The school computers arrived with preloaded games. These were the second batch that the school had received

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The school computers arrived with games preloaded.These were the second batch the school had received

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