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i need help this is due tomorow!!!!this poem should be about the one responsiblity that u love or hate and should contain 4 considtent figurative language and also have to be about as being a big sister cause i cant come up with one

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Cleaning

Looking around me, fearing the walls closing in to mock me.
My little brother, pointing at me with his razor-bladed fingernails, laughing.
As if his laughs were a shadow of my own person, they reverberated in the room.
I collapse to the ground like a spilled cup of water.

This poem consists of 4 elements in poetry:
Personification: "Fearing the walls closing in to mock me," as walls cannot literally mock anyone.
Hyperbole: "My little brother, pointing at me with his razor-bladed fingernails, laughing," is an exaggeration since his fingernails aren't that sharp.
Simile: "I collapse to the ground like a spilled cup of water," is a simile as it compares two unlike objects with the term "like."
Metaphor: "As if his laughs were a shadow of my own person, they reverberated in the room," is a metaphor as it uses "as a" and compares two unlike objects.

I hope this helps!
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