Question

Read this excerpt from a speech meant for the general public:

Welcome to this evening's performance of The Tale Missy May. I would like to applaud these students for the hard work they put in to make the play one of the best in the annals of this institution.

Which revision will make the speech more appropriate for an audience of elementary students?

A. Change "The Tale of Missy May" to "The Story of Missy May"
B. Change "hard work" to "considerable effort"
C. Change "evening's performance" to "tonight's dramatic presentation'
D Change "the annals of this institution" to "our school's history"

Answer 1

(APEX) D. Change "the annals of this institution" to "our school's history"

Answer 2

ANSWER – D (Change "the annals of this institution" to "our school's history")

Having read that excerpt from a speech meant for the general public, the phrase which needs to be revised in order to make the speech more appropriate for an audience of elementary students is "the annals of this institution"… elementary students will understand "our school's history" more easily.