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Which of these is the BEST way to rewrite the sentence in line 16? A) Dunbar did not have the opportunity to attend college after high school he worked as an elevator attendant. B) Dunbar did not have the opportunity to attend college, he worked as an elevator attendant after high school. Eliminate C) After high school, Dunbar did not have the opportunity to attend college; he worked as an elevator attendant. D) After he finished high school, Dunbar did not have the opportunity to attend college, he worked as an elevator attendant.

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C sounds the best to my ears
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