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Can someone check if what I wrote is accurately wriiten?

Can someone check if what I wrote is accurately wriiten?-example-1
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User Katya
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I dont see a problem with grammar, thought you can try to have about 1 comma per sentence. For example,  "for last christmas for camping," you could end the sentence there with a period and take out the "for"
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User Shivam Kumar
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