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Rewrite the sentence below by eliminating unnecessary words and using correct punctuation.

The explorer discovered a new land and he decided to settle there and then a hurricane destroyed everything.

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User Thordax
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The explorer discovered land and he decided to settle there, then a hurricane destroyed everything.

Hope it helps you, its what i would put tbh.
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User John Leehey
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The explorer discovered land and he decided to settle there. Then, there was a hurricane that destroyed everything.
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User Tarwirdur Turon
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