Question

Which is the best way to rewrite these sentences?

They had to walk over 1,000 miles of rough terrain, as thousands of men, women, and children went from their Georgia homelands to Oklahoma. Forced to march over 1,000 miles of rough terrain, thousands of men, women, and children abandoned their Georgia homelands for Oklahoma. Forced to march over 1,000 miles of rough terrain, as thousands of men, women, and children walked from their Georgia homelands for Oklahoma.

Answer 1

Thousands of men, woman, and children were forced to walk over 1,000 miles through rough terrain from their Georgia homelands to Oklahoma.

Answer 2

Thousands of men, women, and children were forced to walk over 1,000 miles of rough terrain from their Georgia homelands to Oklahoma.