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When Harold went racing down the hill on his sled. He hit a large bump and flew into the air, and landed safely on the ground. How is the sentence fragment best corrected?

When Harold went racing down the hill on his sled. He hit a large bump and flew into the air, and landed safely on the ground. How is the sentence fragment best corrected?
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When Harold went racing down the hill on his sled. He hit a large bump and flew into the air, and landed safely on the ground.

How is the sentence fragment best corrected?

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Turn the first period into a comma. I would personally change "and" to but, it sounds better to me.
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