Question

Can anyone help me fix the run-on sentences in this thesis? Please

Indoor smoking has very serious side effects for the consumer and the people around him/her, it causes MANY health risks to the people around them, and indoor smoking can cause secondhand smoke, respiratory disease, and cancer in some cases.

Answer 1

Indoor smoking has very serious side effects for the consumer and the people around them.For example, it causes MANY health risks to the people around them.Also, indoor smoking can cause second hand smoke, respiratory disease, and cancer in some cases.

There you go that should be good.