Question

In which of the following sentences does the writer use concrete language to offer more specific

information?
A. Emmanuelle really likes good poetry.
B. The aroma of bread baking in the oven permeated the entire house.
C. Leaves fell from the tree.
D. I visited a store that sold a variety of furniture

Answer 1

A is incorrect - It doesn't give us concrete evidence as to what kind of poetry. It could be anything.

B is correct - This sentence provides sufficient information to give the reader a visualization of what is happening.

C is incorrect - It only gives us the most basic description of what is happening.

D Is incorrect - I went to a store that sold a variety of WHAT furniture? What kind of store?

Answer 2

It is for sure B. The aroma of bread baking in the oven permeated the entire house.
It's very descriptive.