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Rewrite the following to show rather than tell. The crazy old woman felt bad. She sat on the bench and held her purse in her lap.

Rewrite the following to show rather than tell. The crazy old woman felt bad. She sat on the bench and held her purse in her lap.
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Rewrite the following to show rather than tell.

The crazy old woman felt bad. She sat on the bench and held her purse in her lap.

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The crazy old woman felt bad as she sat on the bench holding her purse in her lap.
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She sat on the old wooden bench, clutching her purse tightly in her lap, the crazy old woman felt bad, as she looked at the ground. 
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